This is interesting, but it's a bit hard to see when it's so large. As for the piece itself, it was a bit hard for me to understand what was going on. I don't know what the top little square panel is depicting. It's all very busy. Maybe if there was some more solid shading or color it would be easier to understand, but I don't know.

I like the last panel (going from left to right). The detail there isn't too muddled, and it's much clearer than the other panels. I also like how the figure in the first panel overlaps the border a bit.

I completely agree with you, you see I post big out of habit i'm sorry, I just start submitting art + fotos and the photos need to be big when someone buys prints..I don't show a small thumbnail and they get a 8 X10 and theres someone mooning the camera. In my rush I just resize every pic. This right now is confusing because of of this is a first panel sketch, no where near complete. I color my comics and no narration or dialogue made because it was just a scene sitting in my head I wanted to jot down, I might redraw completely. As for the scenes I'm picture this panel fitting into a page with other panels. The one the the right of the top left (starter) panel is a eye within wound he just received morphing and moving shape. This would tie in when colored, I can see how that'd be confusing. The bottom with the tear is just some of his former clothes tearing during his metamorphosis into his "Uber" form. I really appreciate the feedback and comments and I will have this post handy when re-touching. - Nick Barakso

ps:Any other questions feel free to comment or note. And thanks again

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Understandable. Usually I choose either 600 or 800 pixels wide when submitting. That seems to be a good size, and not too large for most people's screen resolutions. I haven't had any complaints anyway, haha.

After your explanation I can see what's going on in the panels a bit better.

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